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Pensieve’s Poetic License – Terza Rima

January 17, 2008 · 13 Comments

Intrigued by the prospect of stretching my feeble pea brain a bit, I decided to try the Poetic License this month. I think I was successful, and will probably become a regular participant. This month’s assignment was to write in terza rima, as in Dante’s The Divine Comedy. Our themes were either ‘Beginnings’ or ‘Snackalicious Super Dishes’ – you can read more at our hostess’ blog. See what you think:

Circles

I change the outer shell

Of what I think I see -

To make something to tell,

A thing happy, carefree.

But starting over now….

Is it truly still me?

The changes I allow

Are not what most would guess

Or think. You may endow

My words with more, or less

Meaning and depth – you choose!

No matter how you press

For clearer, brighter clues,

You cannot find the strand

That ties up all old news

And tells of what I planned

To start a thousand times.

Ah! Now the flame is fanned;

I change – my soul still pines

For softer, quiet times.

 

Good? Bad? I like it, but that’s just me. Thanks for reading!

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